Evaluation: Video Review

Having watched the above video, we gained some further constructive criticism from another member of the target audience. The feedback was a mixture of both positive and negative; it was said that we had overall done well and grabbed the whole concept, however, she said the locations we used were quite boring, because there wasn't much to edit due to the same constant scenery. Furthermore, she said that it was a good factor that we had a story, however, it could have been made stronger through better acting. In particular, she enjoyed the flashbacks, and the creativity within the greenscreen.

Taking into account all of the above, if we were to do the video again, we would improve it by perhaps using a different location, or doing different shots in different parts of the park and improved maybe the scenes that had the band rehearsing; we could perhaps organise them playing on an actual stage with a small crowd of people to make it seem more realistic. Another thing we would do was make the lip-synching more precise which would therefore making the acting more professional. Things we would keep the same are the use of special effects, the genre of the video, and the green-screening, as we felt that these things were quite strong, as did the above person.

Written by Jack.